A quiet moment on the balcony

these are my OC's from the novel im writing. the one in the back is Tara and the one in front is Mary. yes i know i based Mary off of myself.. and yes i know its totally lame and cliché`.
Now. for those who do for some reason want to know more about it this is a seen from my book. that little smoky rabbit is a spirit thing i haven’t quite figured out what it dose yet but its not evil but its also not good. Tara and Mary had just finished saying something random and totally pointless but that’s how they cheer each other up. Mary had gotten into a fight with one of there enemies. She had lost unfortunately and had to get rescued by Collin. He’s not in here but I’ll show you guys him soon. I just have to figure out how to draw him.